From day one, Lala has been professional in every way. She responded to my request for help editing my 49,000 word manuscript before anyone else. She dove into my manuscript with intention to polish every line while still maintaining the intentional, raw voice that I wanted. I was very pleased with the 500 word sample she gave me, and it put my mind at ease after seeing how elite her editing skills are. I am beyond excited to move forward with the best version of my book possible.
Larice Addamo | Eagle Eye Editing
- 27 hires
- Based in Seaford, NY
- 14 years in business
- 1 employee
- Responds in about 1 hour
- Background checked
About Larice Addamo | Eagle Eye Editing
Senior Book Editor & Manuscript Specialist | 25+ Years of Experience (HBO, Corporate Giants, Amazon Authors) In publishing and professional communications, a single grammatical misstep or pacing collapse damages an author's credibility. I provide the elite, seasoned editorial eye you need to safeguard your voice, elevate narrative flow, and prepare your manuscript for traditional querying or independent publication. With over 25 years of editorial experience, I have protected the editorial integrity of major corporate giants (HBO, Lowe's, Broadridge Financial), ensured precision for industry publications (Structure Magazine), and partnered with independent authors to polish raw drafts into immaculate books. CORE MANUSCRIPT SERVICES: Comprehensive Copyediting & Line Editing ($0.036/word): My flagship service. Sentence-by-sentence refinement focusing on pacing, dialogue cadence, syntax, and flow while fiercely protecting your unique authorial voice. Fully aligned with the Chicago Manual of Style (CMOS). Includes a final proofreading pass. Developmental Evaluations & Story Roadmaps: High-altitude structural assessments for authors who need to diagnose pacing, character arcs, plot holes, and chapter structure before line editing begins. Final Proofreading ($0.026/word): A meticulous final pass for grammar, punctuation, and typos on clean, structured manuscripts heading to print or digital upload. STUDIO STANDARDS (PLEASE READ BEFORE INQUIRING): 100% Written-Only Workflow: To dedicate my full analytical focus directly to the page and maintain a crystal-clear, transparent paper trail for your files, all consultations, evaluations, and project updates are conducted strictly in writing through the Thumbtack portal and email. I do not conduct phone consultations. Software: I work exclusively in Microsoft Word (.docx) using Track Changes. You retain total creative authority by seeing every edit clearly marked on the page. I do not edit PDF files. The "Eagle Eye" Sample: For new book manuscripts, I provide a complimentary sample edit (up to 500 words) so you can experience my editorial precision firsthand before committing. Milestone Structure: For manuscripts over 20,000 words, projects are divided into comfortable milestone installments to ensure steady, transparent progress. Human Craftsmanship | Fierce Voice Preservation | Publication-Grade Precision Let us bring your book across the finish line with confidence.
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Larice was professional in every way. The finished manuscript was immaculate. Very thorough and knowledgeable editing. And I speak as a former graduate of the University of South Carolina Journalism School. My highest recommendations to any aspiring author to utilize her amazing editing skills!!
I am truly amazed at Larice's proficiency, professionalism, and punctuality. As a first-time author, I was dreading this part of the process. I thought that I would be going back and forth with an Editor trying to make sure that my voice was not altered or silenced, neither was. Maximum respect, Larice.
Larice A. Addamo is a Master Editor! Larice brilliantly edited my book while thoughtfully preserving my writing style. Thanks a million Larice!!!
As a first time author, she guided me through how editing works. Her proofreading skills are superior.
Working with Larice was an absolute pleasure! She edited and proofread my story with true professionalism, offering feedback that was both insightful and encouraging. Larice set a clear delivery goal and met it, providing thoughtful suggestions that genuinely improved my work. I’m grateful for her keen eye and dedication—her input made a real difference. I highly recommend Larice to anyone looking for an editor who is both skilled and truly invested in helping your story shine!
Editing work was terrific. Responsiveness and professionalism was great. Delivered final work ahead of schedule even.
Larice was great to work with. She was able to take about 2 years of work, and in the span of less than a week, it was edited grammatically and put in paragraps where needed, and then proofed. She took a personal interest in my booklet. I'm very grateful!
Larice was very prompt and responsive, she had really good editing suggestions and finished my project 5 days ahead of schedule.
When I first contacted Larice about my novella, I had already talked to several pros on Thumbtack. Both her professionalism and flexibility set her apart from the rest. She responded to my request almost immediately with a tone both professional and personable (that's rare in this industry). She was willing to work with my tentative budget, and she completed the job ahead of schedule, delivering the final project with diligence and an air of finesse. If you're looking for grace and style, I 10/10 would recommend Larice's services.
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